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Comment on Technologial Advances Made in History by ritajeanstangherlin

ritajeanstangherlin — Thu, 18 Dec 2008 15:08:03 +0000

Your essay is perfectly written; you follow the format, execute transitions very well, and vary your sentence beginnings. Well done!! Impressive post.

Comment on Maine Squeeze by Catherine Clark by ritajeanstangherlin

ritajeanstangherlin — Thu, 06 Nov 2008 16:25:01 +0000

I’ve watched your video several times and do not find evidence of the theme. You did, however, an excellent job of integrating text slides in your video. Nice job.

Comment on Maine Squeeze by Catherine Clark by ritajeanstangherlin

ritajeanstangherlin — Thu, 06 Nov 2008 16:03:05 +0000

Really like video, but you omit two things: your title slide appears at the end of your video–need to put it at the beginning. Audience needs to know what it is viewing. You do not identify the character that your actors are portraying. Otherwise, movie trailer works. Good job.

Comment on Hello world! by Mr WordPress

Mr WordPress — Wed, 10 Sep 2008 20:38:31 +0000

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